Thank you for your interest in Subnautica! While most of your application meets our standards, it requires some revisions before acceptance.

Although the personality is solid and detailed, we'd like some expansion on Ellana's flaws and major downfalls. Any conflicts she's had that may have caused issues within the Inquisition or more on her prejudices as a Dalish elf among people who at times look down on her heritage would be good. These are just some ideas, of course, and what you feel are her biggest flaws would be perfectly acceptable.

In addition, due to the Fade being more difficult to connect with here, if you'd like to have more Knight-Enchanter abilities and have the reality shaping toned down, that would be great by us.

You have 72 hours to complete and resubmit these revisions. If the revisions are not adequate, they will result in a rejection for this round. Submit the revisions in a reply to this comment with only the relevant sections.