Thank you for your interest in Subnautica! While most of your application meets our standards, it requires some revisions before acceptance.

If possible, we'd like you to give us more emphasis on the Glaivend Basin war and the bridge choices which created a general atmosphere of distrust towards him and his Shepard powers, causing Sorey to see an uglier side of humanity. We want to hear your thoughts on it and its effects on him, particularly with regards to the overarching theme of Sorey's struggle to remain uncorrupted as Shepard.

You have 72 hours to complete and resubmit these revisions. If the revisions are not adequate, they will result in a rejection for this round. Submit the revisions in a reply to this comment with only the relevant sections.